The passages in this section are drafts of essays in need of revision and will be approximately 250 words.
You will be asked to:
- revise parts of the essay to improve coherence, organization, word choice, rhetorical effectiveness, and use of evidence.
- choose the correct answer for subject-verb agreement, pronoun agreement, and verb tense.
- answer questions about sentence fragments, subordination and coordination, and parallelism, comma splices and run-on sentences, as well as improper punctuation.
- arrange the parts of sentences in the most logical way, including the use of logical transitions.